Development to my Contents Page

I have now started to development my contents page. I have added my photos across the right hand side, I think these photos are effective and very stereotypical for a pop magazine. I have started to layout where my cover lines are going to be. I have chosen to categorise it so my contents page is easy to follow. I have still put the magazine logo in the top left hand corner just so its clear it belongs with the front cover. Know i just have to add my text and page numbers. Also i have got to fill the blank space above my text.

I asked my peers some questions to get there feedback.

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1. Do the photos look effective up the right hand side?

Yes the photos you have used are very stereotypical for your target audience. But pop magazine are very busy and I think there is too much space around your photos, maybe you could squish them up and add another one.

2. do you like that I have separated my text into sections?

Yes your sections are very effective and are all relevant to pop teen girls. This will make the magazine easy to follow which will suit your target audience as at there age they will want it to be easy to follow.

3. Do you like how I used slang instead of using contents page? 

I think your use of slang is very relevant to your target audience and improves your contents page. Teens use slang in a day to day basis therefore when they read a magazine for fun they will want it to be easy to read which slang for them is.